IPA: /tʁwɑ.niks/ || Singer-songwriter, multi-instrumentalist, visual artist, writer. Drummer with The Just Numbers.
Speaks in various tones of meeps.
Joined on 6/26/11
If I knew how to give constructive criticism that's usable, sure.
I'm no good at Cat-ode Bayrots, so I'll pass on trying out the boss.
I'm not sure if I can call myself good.... Sure, I just managed to recently take out the TravisBots, but that was with induced slowdown by running Firefox, FL Studio AND Skype all at once. It was the Jerk Squad that I managed to take down at normal speed.
As for the constructive criticism..... I trust you'll get there somehow. Whatever constructive criticism I know how to give is mainly based on musicality rather than production, so I feel your pain somewhat when I can't comment on one's production levels. : )
Can't say any of them are very constructive, but I left a couple comments. You should finish most of these! :)
Thanks! I'll take a look right away! Some of the works in there were done when I had demo FL 9 and couldn't save, so I may have to start a number of them from scratch.
<a href="http://satanbrain.newgrounds.com/news/post/339805">http://satanbrain.newgrounds.com/news/post/339 805</a>. You did not specify which lyrics. Had you, I could thought of others.
Since I replied to your review of Asperges Me, I was expecting a better version of Asperges Me.
Also, rather funny how every other listener actually got it without me having to say anything more about the piece...
Well? Is it better?
Having studied A-Level English Lit, I can already point out a lot of flaws, but mainly the Elizabethan English.
But I'm not in the position to decide. There are two Lit majors in our midst -- MetalRenard and AlbertStClare. I will ask them to give their input too.