This either is a programme piece, or a piece with no direction.... if it is the latter, it's going to gash the piece quite a bit. If it's the former, I can understand. I still could sense the main melody coming back, which is good. The only thing is that Section I and Section II seem completely disjointed, one from the other. Makes me wonder.......
There are abrupt stops around 1:48.... Did gash my eyes a bit. Then 2:28.... Oh man <3 That ping-pong violin....
It's definitely a good inspiration you've got there, and I have to say that other than what I mentioned, I can tell that you're musically sound.
Again, all the best with the RAC!