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Um...

I know you worked hard on this thing, and I commend you for your effort, but I need to address a few things:

1. No sound effects for the crashing, bouncing and landing. It doesn't even give us the impression that it's supposed to sound real. All we hear are voices.

2. On the subject of voices, the voices sound pretty emotionless.

3. I know that the entire video was supposed to be like a cliffhanger, but it could've been done a lot better - screaming throughout the video destroyed it. And what's more, the 'Oh look, we're home!' was not resolved too well - it sounded like someone saying 'kthxbai' after his submission.

Please, polish up those aspects, and you'd do well with your submission. It'll be nice to see this remade in future, and I love the idea.

JKSSN responds:

Thanks! I am seriously a bad drawer, I dont know anyone who will voice with me, and internet problems forced me to use bad sounds.
But Im improving though so thanks for the tips!!!
Sooooo... kthnxbai! XP

Short but beautiful.

Such a short video has spoken volumes. Congrats to you guys for your efforts.

jackbliss responds:

Thank you so much! Jai Hind my brother :)

Lovely Flash... really lovely Flash.

The story is heartwarming at the beginning and sad at the end. The turn at the end was somewhat well executed, and this is easily one of the best there is out there on NG. Simply beautiful.

And seriously, I don't care about what the rest say, but I'll have to agree with APXypher on the moral tale.

Um...

Good submission (I suppose the fight between man and robot still isn't settled), but shouldn't you be putting this under PG13 for language? I found this under "All Audiences" and.... this is not something really fit for the young 'uns, at the very least.

Lovely vid!

Lovely depiction of DDR; fantastic that you could throw in all those characters in the vid! Luigi sure knows how to bust a move ^_^

I especially loved the end - the boy hugging his dad was just so cute... ^^

Finally, a Flash in HD.

AND IT'S CARAMELLDANSEN! Epicness!
The dancing can be slightly off timing at times but it gets back to speed shortly after. But otherwise, it's really, really good!

Keep it up ^_^

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Annette Walker @Troisnyx

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