Troisnyx's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Milk&Sugar Complete Loop]

Nice loop!

Although it could use a bit of buildup. The fill at the end was good. Otherwise, there wasn't much change in the dynamics - it was the same thing throughout.

Try to add just a bit of variety, but just a bit (Milk & Sugar does suggest a bit of a sugar rush), and you might hit the mark! ^_^

TheMadWasp responds:

Thank-you for reviewing, I know it could do with a build-up, but, this was actually a whole sample divided into severals sounds, at the time, I never thought of even having an intro.

But thanks otherwise, I shall try to add more variety to my music.

[Play - Piano =RC=]

Good, but can do with a little bit of expression..

It's a good attempt, I'll give you that. But even in a piano piece, for it to be more than listenable, there needs to be some expression. Some loud/soft, at the very least. Try putting in some loud and/or soft bits where you feel the piano parts should have them the next time - it'll make a world of difference! ^^

Raymoclaus responds:

Thanks for the criticism, yeah this was made with MuseScore so I can't actually change the volume. this was only meant to be a simple playground theme that anyone could play on piano but the review is appreciated. I will get around to remaking my first 10 songs.

[Xion's theme]

Okay, here goes...

Good overall, but could do with a bit more detail - at this point, it sounds quite plain. The part after the opening should be softer. After that, there's a part where it changes key, and there were low strings being played together with the main melody, making it sound awkward. The choirs at the end were awesome, though.

apivotmaneh responds:

i resubmitted it. hope it sounds better now! check it out!