I get sci-fi vibes, I suppose, but right off the bat, I find the piano a little too bright and dry for something which is meant to invoke awe as this. A little slowdown would have heightened the eerie quality of the intro.
The basses bring the piece to a nitty-gritty sort of life, almost post-apocalyptic. The synths are a bit hit-and-miss, sometimes they feel too high and dry, and sometimes, they fit just right.
Your strings in general are poignant, and make me thirsting for more. I can sort of sing the melody to this too, which is a plus.
I find that there's too little in the way of dynamics. Your loud-soft is heavily reliant on instrument layering, and when each part plays, there's no change in loudness. So for a large part it feels expressionless... dynamics could have really made it soar. I sense deep mysticism within this piece, because your chords and melodies evoke it. Your instruments evoke it. But it sounds unfortunately and sadly bland -- when I know in its heart of hearts it's not meant to be that way.
You've created a picture in my mind and credit where it's due; you are a world- builder. Points do have to be lost, however, for what is missing.
6.5/10.